Hi Jennifer. If you insert an adverb to describe in what manner the mayor pledged to spend more money this would improve the sentence. For example, you could insert ‘sincerely’ into the sentence: ‘The mayor sincerely pledged to spend ...’. Equally, you could describe the manner in which the residents complained: perhaps, they ‘...complained bitterly...’? I have given you two ways haha, but hope th... more

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